Justin,
I am going to comment on one area since you kind of touched on it when you mentioned making the cheekpiece a little smaller. From the pictures it appears that the cheek piece is too convex and the transition to the comb is also too thick. If you had made the cheekpiece more concave, that hollow shape would of transitioned your comb, especially the nose, to a less bulky look. I don't think the cheekpiece is too large, you just left too much wood on it. Overall fit and finish looks good. Hopefully I will get to see and handle the gun in August at Bill's. I am planning on attending, hopefully you will be too.
David