Dave, that is a well drawn plan for an English Sporter. It clearly shows the relationships between all of the component sets. Without such a drawing, one is jumping into deep water on faith alone...for me anyway.
There is one observation about the drawing if I may...I'd like to see the tail of the lock a little closer to the centre line of the wrist. To accomplish that one would need a little more of a humped up top wrist line, or a little less immediate drop at the end of the standing breech.
This is the kind of drawing I make for every gun I build, though not as well done as yours.