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jwh1947

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An author critiques his own work
« on: November 02, 2009, 02:17:15 AM »
In 1993, Don Vaughn and I co-authored a book on Lancaster rifles.  In all truth, I wrote the book in its entirety and Don provided the access to the specimens, and copyread for clarity.  Both aspects were necessary, and that's how this book came about.  I do not offer the following as an excuse, but rather simply as a matter of fact.  We were under time constraints by the publisher and had deadlines.  It needed to be cranked out without delay.  

After sixteen years or so, upon reflection,  there are a few things I would have done differently.  I make no apologies for the folkish drawings, as that is exactly what they were, done by me or by folks who were friends and helped out for the cost of a complimentary book or two.  I also can't take credit for the absence of page numbers; that was a printer's error, and since they were paying for it, it was not done over.  I'm looking at things that could actually be misleading, and here is my confession.

For starters, regarding the Beck rifle with the flame patchbox, on the page adjacent to the Beck pistol--it was clearly identified as a rifle with a patchbox applied later than the original rifle.  We know this because the grooves for the wooden lid are extant and unused.  The rifle has caused problems because some readers did not read the adjacent caption and have put this pattern into their minds as a Beck product.  My opinion is that it is not so.  I envision the added brass box as an attempt to replicate an acceptable blend to the rifle, but by an inferior hand.  It is a nice rifle, but, for my purposes, it is not representative, and I would now leave the rifle out of the text.

Also, the Graeff and the Breitenherd signatures.  All I'll say about them is that, in those days, I had friends at Quantico who had legitimate access to the labs there.  I would have had both of those signatures vetted there as period applications...ruled in as probable, or ruled out.  This was not done.  The "Graeff" signature is faint, and, to be sure, you can see the same gun in George Shumway's work listed as the product of a different maker.  Clearly what I think I saw and what George thought he saw were distinctly different.  Could it be that we were both influenced by the desire to see what we wanted to see?  I accept the possibility of error and should have tempered my language here.  The Breitenherd signature is pronounced; I woke up one night wondering if it were, perhaps, too pronounced.  Never saw another one, and the architecture of the smoothbore is really old but generic.  Anyway, just one researcher's concern.  I do not wish to denigrate any of these arms, just document my uncertainty on these specific points.

Next, the unsigned straight rifle, converted to percussion on the page adjacent to 3 hunting bags.  I would have left it out.  I am rather certain that it is a composite gun of married pieces.  I once owned the piece and know it well, and am not playing with words.  I did nothing to it, but wonder about it.  It is not representative enough.  I would not include it today, even though the patchbox is pure Lancaster and very well built.

Worst of all perhaps is the photo of the military musket adjacent to the vignette entitled "gunpowder and lead."  I profess innocence on this terrible photograph, as it was the only acceptable specimen I could find nearby (in the Commonwealth "William Penn" Museum) and the Commonwealth insisted that I use their photographer and pay for the photo.  This is the best my government could do; my tax dollars at work.  Sorry.

I feel better now that I got that off my chest, as, at least, I got a chance to correct some possibly misleading words.  I've never been told I wrote something wrong in this book, but, as you can surmise, I would not be offended one bit if you find a mistake.  I just want to know about it so that it, too, can be corrected. JWH

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Offline Tanselman

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Re: An author critiques his own work
« Reply #1 on: November 02, 2009, 04:40:01 AM »
It is valuable to get clarifications and an inside look into the thought process of an author. An author usually has better insight into what he/she has researched and published on than does the general public, so clarifying old comments or correcting/modifying old conclusions add knowledge to the field of study.

I think it might be a little unfair to call Wayne's comments a "supplement" to his book, and ask both he and Vaughn to sign it.  Wayne has simply offered personal thoughts on the matter, to help all of us, and possibly prevent a misconception or two. Were it really a supplement, he would probably have his words edited and proof read, etc., along with involvement with the other author. It might be discomforting to Don Vaughn to be asked to sign a copy of Wayne's personal and unedited thoughts.

We should appreciate the up-date by Wayne (I wish more authors would do this), and the educational value it offers to us, and not make this into something it isn't... until such time as Wayne and Don decide to do a supplement. These are useful notes to print off and slide inside the cover of his book for future reference. Wayne, thanks for posting them.  Shelby Gallien
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Re: An author critiques his own work
« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2009, 04:51:34 AM »
Wayne,

Thank you for the up-date.  I appreciate your clarifications. I've printed it for posterity, and slipped a copy inside my book. (I finally located a copy at Booksavers of Ephrata last winter.)
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Re: An author critiques his own work
« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2009, 08:13:00 AM »
It would make sense to put a copy inside the cover of the book.  Unfortunately Don passed away recently, so these are entirely my interpretations.  JWH

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Re: An author critiques his own work
« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2009, 03:48:09 PM »
I too appreciate the updated information as well.  And although it can be confusing for those seeking information to find the same gun presented with different descriptions among several different reference books published over the years, I also understand why some authors cannot, or chose not to, update as well.   

I am very grateful to those who share their collections and the authors who help put the information out there for us to study - whether in published form, the internet, at shows, or here on the "Virtual Museum".  People make their best assessments and work within the constraints of the publisher at the time the books are authored, and as new information comes to light, opinions sometimes change.  I feel it is just as valuable an education to see how the opinions of various pieces are refined over time - to see the detective work, the debate and the rationale behind the different positions - as it is to read a one paragraph description of a piece and be done with it  ;)

Thanks again

Guy

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Re: An author critiques his own work
« Reply #5 on: November 02, 2009, 06:30:47 PM »
Wayne H,
The best contribution any of us can make to advance the study of American longrifles is to propose a thesis for consideration, debate, further research and
eventual refutation or acceptance over time.  That is the appropriate process, I think. Two of the earliest scholars in the field, Dillon and Kindig, did not always get it right, but we are very appreciative of their groundbreaking work. Thanks for your reflections.
Wayne E.
Wayne Elliott