Overall, a slim-looking and attractive gun, I really like the old lock and your aging treatment. But, since you asked, and in the spirit of constructive criticism, I'll offer a few comments; you need to work on your screw heads and countersinks as these look rough and unfinished, some of your screw slots are bungled, and the screw heads don't sit down as far as they should. I also don't care for the curvature of the butt, and I feel that if a gun has a metal forend and a rear ramrod pipe, it ought to have a butplate to visually balance it out - just my opinion. Also, the comb is weak, and your transition from wrist to comb needs work. Finally, the cheekpiece looks huge and out of place. Again, I offer these as my opinions, and as hopefully useful criticism. Keep it up!