Mark, I think your 'charting' is excellent & covers a lot more "data" than my loading notes provide.
I see nothing negative about it.
I see no need for:
score ring
score X
score orientation
rb vs Conical - could just have 2 lines RB and check mark or conical and check mark
however diameter and weight will show which
About the scoring "lines" - if you shoot the same targets in competition, perhaps it is necessary.
I use whatever target looks the best to me at that range and shoot to the sights when developing loads (grouping), or for sighting in- (precision).
Overall, looks good to me.