Hi Scota, I think the engraving looks nice and a straight line border is better than no border but if you would engrave some thing on the area betwix the three screws forward of the box lid I think this would make it less naked looking. I like your rifle.
not what your seeking but its cool
I couldn't find a picture of my friend's contemporary Vincent, but it was based on the Caleb Vincent rifle on the right in the article. http://www.aolrc.com/upload/files/Vol%20II%20No%201%20Feb%201980.pdfI've seen at least one other contemporary Vincent with this design placed between checkpiece and butt plate. Caleb seems to like putting the design on the right side of the stock in lieu of a patchbox. Here's another example from Shumways "Gunsmiths of Ohio." Notice the moon is reversed on this one. Once again, the engraving is very basic. I think it's also important to note that the stars the Vincents used above the cheek piece were not the typical 8 point star you see on PA rifles. Their's are seen in the photo of their inlay patterns in the Campus Maritus Museum.